Free ParaPro Sentence and Paragraph Organization Questions and Answers 2 — Questions and Answers
Question 1: Which sentence is a run-on and needs correction?
- The dog barked loudly.
- She finished her homework, she went outside to play. (Correct answer)
- After the rain stopped, the children went to the park.
- The library closes at nine o'clock.
Correct answer: She finished her homework, she went outside to play.
'She finished her homework, she went outside to play' is a comma splice (a type of run-on): two independent clauses joined only by a comma, without a coordinating conjunction.
A run-on sentence joins two or more independent clauses without proper punctuation or a conjunction. A comma splice is a specific run-on where two independent clauses are joined only by a comma. Corrections: (1) use a period — 'She finished her homework. She went outside to play.' (2) add a coordinating conjunction — 'She finished her homework, and she went outside to play.' (3) use a semicolon — 'She finished her homework; she went outside to play.' All three options are grammatically correct.
Question 2: Which sentence is a fragment?
- The children played in the yard for hours.
- Because the test was cancelled. (Correct answer)
- Maria studied every night and improved her grade.
- The teacher explained the assignment clearly.
Correct answer: Because the test was cancelled.
'Because the test was cancelled' is a dependent clause — it cannot stand alone as a sentence because it lacks an independent clause to complete the thought.
A sentence fragment lacks one or more elements of a complete sentence: a subject, a predicate (verb), or a complete thought. 'Because the test was cancelled' has a subject and verb but is a subordinate clause — it begins with a subordinating conjunction ('because') that makes it dependent on an independent clause. Correction: 'Because the test was cancelled, students had extra time to study.' The other options are all complete, independent sentences.
Question 3: A student writes: 'Dogs make great pets. They are loyal and friendly. Also dogs are easy to train.' Which revision BEST improves the paragraph's flow?
- Delete the third sentence entirely
- Combine the sentences using transitions: 'Dogs make great pets because they are loyal, friendly, and easy to train.' (Correct answer)
- Add more sentences about cats
- Change 'dogs' to 'puppies' in every sentence
Correct answer: Combine the sentences using transitions: 'Dogs make great pets because they are loyal, friendly, and easy to train.'
Combining the three choppy sentences into one using the conjunction 'because' and a list with proper transitions creates smoother, more cohesive writing.
Choppy writing results from too many short, disconnected sentences. Combining them with conjunctions, relative clauses, or lists improves flow and shows relationships between ideas. The revision 'Dogs make great pets because they are loyal, friendly, and easy to train' uses 'because' to show the causal relationship and a list to efficiently combine three supporting points. This is more sophisticated and reads more smoothly than three separate short sentences.
Question 4: Which transition word BEST shows a contrast between two ideas?
- Furthermore
- Additionally
- However (Correct answer)
- Therefore
Correct answer: However
'However' signals a contrast or contradiction between two ideas, helping readers understand that the second idea differs from or limits the first.
Transition words signal relationships between ideas. 'Furthermore' and 'additionally' add information. 'Therefore' shows a conclusion or result. 'However' signals contrast — the second idea is different from, opposed to, or limits what was just said. Example: 'The weather was cold; however, they decided to play outside.' Using the right transition is crucial for clear writing organization, and selecting inappropriate transitions is a common student error.
Question 5: A student writes a paragraph with five supporting details but no topic sentence. What revision should the paraprofessional suggest?
- Add more supporting details
- Add a topic sentence at the beginning that states the main idea the details support (Correct answer)
- Remove three of the supporting details
- Move the paragraph to the conclusion
Correct answer: Add a topic sentence at the beginning that states the main idea the details support
A paragraph without a topic sentence lacks a controlling idea. Adding a topic sentence at the beginning tells readers what the paragraph is about and unifies the supporting details.
A complete paragraph structure: Topic Sentence → Supporting Details → Concluding Sentence. The topic sentence states the main idea the paragraph will develop. Without it, readers must infer the main point from the details alone — an unnecessary cognitive burden. The paraprofessional should help the student identify what all five details have in common and write a sentence that expresses that central idea. Adding more details to a structurally incomplete paragraph compounds the problem.
Question 6: Which of the following is an example of correct parallel structure?
- She likes to swim, running, and to bike.
- She likes swimming, running, and biking. (Correct answer)
- She likes to swim, to running, and biker.
- She likes swimming, to run, and biked.
Correct answer: She likes swimming, running, and biking.
'Swimming, running, and biking' uses parallel gerund (-ing) forms consistently for all three items in the list — correct parallel structure.
Parallel structure (parallelism) requires that items in a list, series, or comparison use the same grammatical form. In 'swimming, running, and biking,' all three are gerunds (-ing form used as nouns). Common errors include mixing infinitives (to swim) with gerunds (swimming) or past participles (biked). The rule applies to any list: verbs must be in the same tense, nouns must be all singular or all plural, and phrases must have the same structure.
Which sentence is a run-on and needs correction?